Part 1

The gallows stood in the small yard, separate from the main grounds of the prison and overgrown with tall prickly weeds.-George Orwell

Imitation:  The dead body resided on the floor of the empty dorm room, adjacent to the other rooms in the hall and reeking of foul smells.

                If one must worship a bully, it is better that he should be a policeman than a gangster.-George Orwell

Imitation: If someone has to go to jail, it makes more sense for this person to be the guilty indivdual rather than an innocent bystander.

                To have even a portion of this illuminated reason and true philosophy is the highest state to which nature can aspire, in the way of intellect.

Imitation: To high five the running back after he scores a touchdown is the greatest honor for anyone in the stadium, in the environment of the NFL.

Part 2

                He went through the narrow alley of the Temple Bar quickly, muttering to himself that they could all go to hell because he was going to have a good night of it.

Variation: He muttered that they could all go to hell because he was going to make a good night of it, as he quickly went through the narrow alley in the Temple Bar.

Alternate: Muttering to himself that they could all go to hell, he quickly went through the narrow alley in the Temple Bar, because he was going to make a good night of it.

 

 

 

Posted by jsteb on October 1, 2008
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