I feel like my writing evolved a lot, but because I don’t have the vantage point of an outsider looking in its hard to decipher how I have actually improved. Perhaps a miniscule improvement is that my vocabulary has improved, which is always a good thing. And I also think I have learned to be much more detailed about the topics I write about, just comparing my first essay (which was very ambiguous) with my Memoir, I see that I have learned to write more specifically. I also feel like I have become a little freer with my voice, but it is still a bit constrained because of my academically styled tendencies. Another minor thing is that I think I have gotten a better feel for sentence structures that flow (must have been those marvelous imitation exercises).
Posted by jsteb on December 9, 2008
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